FEATURES-CHEESE

Writer: Galstyan
Editor: D’Onfro

Fact Check complete:
Features-CHEESE_FactCheck_Clifford_041712 (6:02 pm)

READY FOR FACTCHECKING:
FEATURES_CHEESE_ANNOTATION_GALSTYAN_041312
FEATURES_CHEESE_TRANSCRIPTION_GALSTYAN_041312

READY FOR DESIGN:

FEATURES_CHEESE_READYFORDESIGN_DONFRO_041312

POSTRFO AND COPY EDIT, fact checking already underway:
FEATURES_CHEESE_POSTRFO_DONFRO_041112 worked through Obbie’s comments etc. but made a few chances that I wanted you to check to make sure they didn’t affect the facts of the piece

POSTRFO AND COPYEDIT for Obbie, 04/11, 2:00 p.m. FEATURES_CHEESE_POSTRFO_GALSTYAN_041112

POST COPY EDIT (needs TK’s filled and annotations from YG) (10 am):
FEATURES_CHEESE_POSTCOPYEDIT_DONFRO_041012 (1)

Copyedit:

FEATURES_CHEESE_COPYEDIT_VILASBOAS_040812 (4:51 a.m. — Some of Yelena’s TKs got filled in as well, I believe?)

RFO:
FEATURE-CHEESE_RFOrewrite_Obbie_040612
FEATURE_CHEESE_RFO_Obbie_040612

Ready for Obbie w/couple minor TKs:

FEATURE_CHEESE_RFO_GALSTYAN_040512

Top Edit:
FEATURES_CHEESE_TOPEDIT_DONFRO_040512, 2:41 am

FEATURES_CHEESE_TOPEDIT_GALSTYAN_040412

FEATURES_CHEESE_POSTTOPEDIT_DONFRO_4312, 11 pm

FEATURES_CHEESE_TOPEDIT_GALSTYAN_040312, 6:30 p.m.

FEATURES_CHEESE_TOPEDIT_SAVIGNANO_040212

MAIN EDIT:

FEATURES_CHEESE_MAINEDIT_GALSTYAN_040212, posted at 3:00 p.m.
FEATURES_CHEESE_MAINEDIT_DONFRO_040212 (1), posted at 9:20 am

FEATURES_CHEESE_MANUSCRIPT_GALSTYAN_040112, posted at 11:59 p.m.

SIDEBARS:
FEATURES_CHEESE_MANUSCRIPT_SIDEBAR_CHEESETRAIL_DONFRO_40112

ROUGH MANUSCRIPT/OUTLINE:

FEATURES_CHEESE_MANUSCRIPT_GALSTYAN_040112 w/outline to quickly look at, posted at 7:24 p.m.

FEATURES_CHEESE_MANUSCRIPT_DONFRO_033112

FEATURES_CHEESE_MANUSCRIPT_GALSTYAN_033112

FEATURES_CHEESE_MANUSCRIPT_GALSTYAN_033012

PROGRESS:

FEATURE_CHEESE_PROGRESS_GALSTYAN_040112

FEATURE_CHEESE_PROGRESS_GALSTYAN_032012

Obbie comments on art memo, 2/15 at 9 a.m.
FEATURE_CHEESE_ARTMEMO__Obbie_021512

Obbie comments on assignment memo, 2/15 at 8:20 a.m.:
FEATURE-CHEESE_AssignmentMemo_OBBIE_021512

Assignment memo posted by D’Onfro on 2/14 (?):
TK after file size problem fixed (Jillian, please repost original here)

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