Writer: Erin Carson
Editor: Gerilyn Manago
Top Editor: Lizzy Gomez
Fact Checker/Copy Editor: Alyssa LaFaro
Proof revisions by Gerilyn Manago, 4/26 at 11:04 p.m.
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Proof by Lizzy Gomez and Alyssa LaFaro, 4/26
*on paper
Ready for Proof
Proof revisions by Gerilyn Manago, 4/26 at 8:25 p.m.
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Proof by Alyssa and Lizzy, 4/26 at 6:46 p.m. in CMR
*Done on paper
Ready for Proof
Copy Edit 2 revisions by Gerilyn Manago, 4/26 at 6:22 p.m.
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Copy Edit 2 by Alyssa LaFaro, 4/25/2012 at 5:16 p.m. in CMR
*Done on Paper
Ready for Copy Edit 2
Fit and display revisions by Gerilyn Manago, 4/25 at 4:11 p.m.
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Fit and display by Gerilyn Manago, 4/16 in class
*Done on paper
Flow* by Gerilyn Manago, 4/16 at 2:12 a.m.
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*Writer and editor collaborated and decided to cut background info
Flow by Gerilyn Manago, 4/15 at 11:48 p.m. (ATTN: overflowing)
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Ready for FLOW
Copy Edit Revisions by Gerilyn Manago, 4/6 at 9:44 p.m.
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Copy Edit posted by Alyssa LaFaro, 4/4/2012 at 8:44 p.m.
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Ready for Copy Edit
Edited Fact Check by Alyssa LaFaro, 4/3/2012 at 8:31 p.m.
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Fact Check revisions by Gerilyn Manago, 4/2 at 11:07 a.m.
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Fact Check by Alyssa LaFaro, 3/27/2012 at 4:24 p.m.
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Ready for Fact Check
Writer Post-RFO by Erin Carson, 3/26 at 12:32 a.m.
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Editor post-RFO comments by Gerilyn Manago, 3/25 at 3:34 p.m.
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Writer post-RFO revisions by Erin Carson, 3/24 at 4:57 p.m.
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Editor post-RFO comments by Gerilyn Manago, 3/21 at 2:22 p.m.
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Obbie edits of RFO version, posted 3/5 at 12:53 p.m.
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READY FOR OBBIE
RFO draft by Gerilyn Manago, 3/4 at 7:19 p.m.
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Top Edit by Lizzy Gomez, 3/4 at 3:31 p.m.
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Main Edit 2 Revisions by Erin Carson, 2/27 at 3:06 p.m.
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Main edit 2 by Gerilyn Manago, 2/26 at 3:16 p.m.
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Main edit revisions by Erin Carson, 2/26 at 2:31 p.m.
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Main edit by Gerilyn Manago, 2/25 at 6:53 p.m.
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Manuscript by Erin Carson, 2/25 at 5:53 p.m.
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Obbie comments on art memo, 2/21 at 7:51 a.m.
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Art Memo by Gerilyn Manago, 2/20 at 2:34 a.m.
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Obbie comments on assignment memo, 2/18 at 9:20 a.m.
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Assignment Memo by Gerilyn Manago, 2/18 at 2:04 a.m.
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